Dioccino's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mohammed Does A Dance]

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Welp. This is actually pretty retarded buuut I actually like how the dance is in sync with the music and shows a variety of things, and the music is good too. Also the face is creepily well done.

Sidorio responds:

Unfortunately, some Dane drew the face and the music sync was accidental.

[detailed stick fight]

Oh wow

Compared to a lot of stick figure fights I've seen here on Newgrounds, this really surprised me. It surpassed any expectations I had of it and is actually good. Obviously the fireball effects were great but the smooth animation of the figures were good too.

atomicfox responds:

great review, i miss reviewers like you, they seem t be dying out and turning into spamers, anyway thanks for the review and keep up the good work

[My LoZ Animation]

Not bad

It's cool that you drew everything yourself but the problem with this animation is that... well... There's just not much animation in it. You drew a bunch of still pictures and rotated them and there really wasn't much of a story told, it was just on a white backdrop and you repeated a lot of the still images. For example, when Ganon takes Zelda away, it looked like they just slid off screen rather than him having her in his clutches. And then the final moments of the video just kinda lulled along, with like 4 seconds of the Triforce illustration rotating, link blinking, an image of Ganon's grave, and the word "Link" going towards the history book. You could have illustrated this so much better--when the song says Link has saved the day, have him looking triumphant instead of just standing there. Show an image of Link actually in the history book (Wind Waker's medieval illustrations in the beginning would've been ideal).

Sorry for being blunt, but for an *animation* it's nothing impressive.

brittanyproctor responds:

thanks for the opinion its like only my second animation animation i still trying to get the hang of it seeing as i just been in there for a little while i still trying my hardest seeing i only giving so long between the projects and i do plan to go back and redo things thanks again